- #Perfect dark gameboy color verification
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It follows the neutral point of view policy. It is factually accurate and verifiable.Ī (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):. Editors at peer review might give you a harder time about grammar if you are going for FA (not saying it was bad but I do tend to be less critical so double check yourself).Ī (prose): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): The notes above are not bad enough to not pas this (please please please address them) since the article is so good. Wikilinking (and therefore the tone of someone familiar with games and someone not) is almost great (see above). Images have FURs and you made sure not to go overboard with the use of copyrighted content. You got the fictional vs encyclopedic tone down well. #Perfect dark gameboy color verification
The ref formatting is great (I personally do not like quotes but that is my reference v assisting in verification along with common practice). You did not overburden the lead with unneeded sources. #Perfect dark gameboy color plus
You hit many things I look for plus some. Double check your links to make sure they are not dupped (besides the lead and infobox but keep in mind that other factors do come into play) For example Game Boy Color is linked way down but not above. But you are bound by sources and made it detailed enough to meet the GA benchmark.
I encourage you to find more for the "Gameplay" and the "Plot" sections. Game Boyz is italicized in the prose but not in the reference. However, it might be better to lay it out in something more encyclopedic. 
I get what you are saying, and I doubt any reader would not. Same could be said for the following "On the other hand", even though that is not as bad. The reader can understand it without the "however".
"Criticism, however, was levelled at the game's difficult gameplay due to the lack of health and ammunition, and distinct lack of strategy overall." - "however" is not needed and could be seen as going against WP:WORDS. "At the time, Rare had the Game Boy team split into two, one for the Game Boy Color version of Donkey Kong Country and the other for Perfect Dark." - Might need to be ".Rare had its' 'Game Boy team split into two.". "Objectives can range from rescuing hostages to exploring areas and recovering items, such as keycards, explosives or laptop computers which are useful to hack into electronic devices." might need to be cleaned up. Reviewer: Cptnono ( talk) 06:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC) Reply The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Perfect Dark (Game Boy Color)/GA1. Thank you.īetacommandBot ( talk) 14:49, 8 March 2008 (UTC) Reply When does it take place? 
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